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Critique for entity piece

Postby assumzaek » Wed Jun 10, 2015 1:04 am

Hey guys, I registered today on this site, so please excuse me if I'm not posting this in the correct threads section, but that's the most qualified I found for my particular request I believe. I as working on this for a few days. I just wanted a few extra critiques at the end to help make this piece more solid. So, please if you see something worth critiquing share it with me, I would greatly appreciate that. Thanks in advance!

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Re: Critique for entity piece

Postby Caleb-Brown » Wed Oct 21, 2015 1:51 am

Hi! This is sooo late but heres a quick paintover i did
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i really like the composition of this painting!! My main changes were just to give a lot of info in the shadow since the light areas are over exposed and flat and to make the forms stronger. yep that's pretty much it.
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