Doctore wrote:Character looks pretty dope! slight tweak in light and dark areas to make things more clear will help with the volume!
Imbalantus wrote:Crits for the pirate:
Always get the shadows consistent. Sometimes you use soft shadows, sometimes hard shadows. Can't have both, gotta pick one and stick with it.
Design is all good, but I didn't even notice at first that she was a woman, and lol'd after I noticed that the character has titties. So I would emphasize her femininity more, give her a more feminine face, less extravagant earrings, definitely normal ears, bigger boobies.
Naidy wrote:LOVE the variety of faces and figures in here, I imagine that wide range of studies is why many of your ideas look very interesting to me hard for me to critique, honestly. Just keep on coming with the art, its good stuff.
caseylarae wrote:Really nice drawings here! Overall nice anatomy, proportions are looking good. That being said, your paintings would really benefit from some experimentation with brush strokes. The brush strokes in your work feelunintentional -- they seem loose, which can be a good thing, but it seems like you're not thinking about how the edges and textures of the brush strokes affect the painting as a whole, adding emphasis to certain areas while removing it from others.
That being said, there are some pieces here that conversley feel over rendered, over textured, or over smoothed; it seems like you're not sure which effects you want to achieve when you paint. Take a look at some masters (old or new) and see how they did or do texture, considering which textures are effective for communicating which surfaces and lighting conditions. Might be helpful to do studies of master works as well, trying to emulate the brush strokes of paintings you like. Hope that helps, keep up the cool drawing work :D
Henri wrote:Was fun flipping through! I love the bird character you recently posted "crane1" It makes me think of the character illustrations in soul calibur. Can't wait to see more ^_^
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