Wow, those eyes. Love the colour!!
For your figures, may I suggest looking at Steve hustons or Glenn Vilppu's drawings and demos? https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=P ... R4kUPO3jqa
this is a link i've been watching recently!! i find it very helpful.
Try to work on your gesture and form as well as anatomy! Observe how great animators especially approach getting action and life in their figures, but how they manage to economise their lines and keep a flow in their drawings.
Keep it up!! hope to see moreeeee ^_^