Laura García's sketchbook: harsh critiques welcome (please )

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Re: Laura García's sketchbook: harsh critiques welcome (plea

Postby engrailed » Wed Jul 20, 2016 12:14 pm

I don't have much critique but I really like the portraits you've been doing! It's definitely one of your stronger areas so keep it up!
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Re: Laura García's sketchbook: harsh critiques welcome (plea

Postby laugart » Sun Sep 04, 2016 3:41 am

wii third page!

I've been on vacation so unfortunately not so productive. When I got back I got into Newmasters Academy. great site, lots of content. I notice some improvement already, at least in understanding stuff.

some stuff
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Re: Laura García's sketchbook: harsh critiques welcome (plea

Postby divinefapper » Sun Sep 04, 2016 3:56 am

Yo, great shit! When you start to paint, I'd get some hard brush to balance things out a bit. At the moment your paintings look tad bit too blurry : 3
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Re: Laura García's sketchbook: harsh critiques welcome (plea

Postby laugart » Sat Mar 11, 2017 1:58 am

I'm like the worst person ever at posting consistently
anyway, some stuff! This `past months have been full of changes. in every aspect of my life, so my art and my focus changed too.

first, stuff from the end of 2016
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Re: Laura García's sketchbook: harsh critiques welcome (plea

Postby laugart » Sat Mar 11, 2017 9:30 am

moar! from this year
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Re: Laura García's sketchbook: harsh critiques welcome (plea

Postby laugart » Sat Jun 03, 2017 9:34 am

more recent stuff
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Re: Laura García's sketchbook: harsh critiques welcome (plea

Postby ubem » Sat Jun 17, 2017 6:36 am

Your understanding of anatomy and muscle seems pretty good. The biggest issue is the proportions of the overall figures, maybe missing the forest for the trees. Necks are a little long and sometimes facial features don't feel they're placed naturally. I would recommend doing complete figure drawings like the one you recently posted, taking your time to make sure all the measurements are accurate. Hope this is helpful, awesome work!
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