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Postby fiftyeightsqq » Fri Apr 18, 2014 5:32 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby gablain » Fri Apr 18, 2014 7:25 pm

I see you are drawing from life. Really nice ! Do loads of them so you can get that line confidence down. Some stuff looks a bit out of perspective, so i would do a few simple perspective studies to make sure you grasp those fundamentals. Keep it up !
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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Fri Apr 18, 2014 10:44 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby three » Fri Apr 18, 2014 10:57 pm

your contours are getting somewhere, i can see there's definitely some learning going on and that's great man, GOOD STUFF
my only advice is maybe break it up a little by slowing down every now and then. Yeah get your contours done, it'll get the juices flowing but then try slowing down and applying strokes with as much confidence as you possibly can, I think this will be invaluable for you.
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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Sun Apr 20, 2014 12:07 am

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Re: 58;''

Postby algenpfleger » Sun Apr 20, 2014 1:44 am

nice loose lines man, don't ignore construction though! that box animation is really good practice. keep at it!
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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Sun Apr 20, 2014 6:39 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Mon Apr 21, 2014 7:39 pm

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Re: 58;''

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Postby fiftyeightsqq » Sat Apr 26, 2014 12:53 pm

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Postby fiftyeightsqq » Sat Apr 26, 2014 3:15 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Sat May 03, 2014 12:38 am

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Postby fiftyeightsqq » Sat May 03, 2014 5:06 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Thu May 08, 2014 1:01 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby MgcUsr » Thu May 08, 2014 1:43 pm

I like your animations :>
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Postby fiftyeightsqq » Thu May 08, 2014 9:13 pm

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Postby fiftyeightsqq » Tue May 13, 2014 3:57 pm

MgcUsr wrote:I like your animations :>

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Sun May 18, 2014 12:10 am

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Re: 58;''

Postby superpaddi » Sun May 18, 2014 1:03 am

Hey I like your animations,
what software did you use to create them?
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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Tue May 20, 2014 2:02 am

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superpaddi wrote:Hey I like your animations,
what software did you use to create them?

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Wed May 21, 2014 8:15 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Thu May 29, 2014 7:52 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Tue Jun 03, 2014 11:43 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Mon Jun 09, 2014 12:16 am

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Re: 58;''

Postby sachsapne » Mon Jun 09, 2014 1:52 am

yes yes more color studies, do some sketches from imagination too. Those life sketches are great exercises too :D
i wanna see more *-*
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