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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Wed Apr 13, 2016 3:00 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Fri Apr 22, 2016 9:21 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Tue May 03, 2016 9:40 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby Moe » Thu May 05, 2016 4:17 pm

I dig your sketchbook your lines look nice and your characters are full of energy. I should probably incorporate this into my own work
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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Sat May 07, 2016 10:07 pm

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@Moe
Thanks for commenting, it's interesting to hear what you think.
I usually don't see such things in what I draw since I see other things hahaha.
Whatever it is you want to incorporate, experiment a lot.
Right now traditional has a lot for me to explore when I switched most practice to it a few weeks ago.
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Re: 58;''

Postby Moe » Sun May 08, 2016 5:04 am

Your animations are really nice, makes me wanna do some too. What software are you using for your animations? Also, you have some pretty solid form and construction skills. I also see you draw a lot of boxes and cylinders. What resources did you use for learning perspective?
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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Thu Aug 04, 2016 6:27 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Thu Aug 04, 2016 6:32 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Thu Aug 04, 2016 6:33 pm

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@Moe
Sorry for the wait, I'll leave the reply in your sketchbook.
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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Tue Aug 16, 2016 4:55 am

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Wed Aug 17, 2016 6:00 am

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I need to work harder.
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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Wed Aug 17, 2016 10:32 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Fri Aug 19, 2016 12:47 am

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Re: 58;''

Postby Luna » Fri Aug 19, 2016 2:05 pm

it's an amazing amount of works you got, 58!!! <3
love your 0000000000198.gif too!!! o(∩_∩)o
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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Sat Aug 20, 2016 11:23 pm

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@Luna
Thanks! I'm reminded that I should animate again soon.
I hope that I can keep up my output once classes start.
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Re: 58;''

Postby Zipfelzeus » Sun Aug 21, 2016 2:47 am

I've been seeing you around here more and more. Do you come here often? I think I would recognise such a handsome face. Hhaha
Anyway it's just nice to see people keeping the at least some activity in the forum!

Nice work on all the heavy ink sketches. That's a really tricky medium!

My only suggestion would be to slow down once in while and do a longer study and really get the shapes accuretly. Quick sketches and studies are good to train you speed and give a feel for the motion of the pose, the problem is though that you're always kinda just bullshit the anatomy because of the time restrains so you'll never get the full information on how the anatomy work and in the worst case might end up teaching yourself mistakes.
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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Sat Aug 27, 2016 7:35 pm

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@Zipfelzeus
I'm in a long term relationship with PN so I'll keep coming back ;)
Keeping up activity with school will be difficult but I'm on it.
Currently registered to a design drawing class for non-majors with a cool teacher.
After the first class, he offered to contact the art department to override some permits for me.
If it goes through, I'll be moving into the class for Industrial Design majors.
I aim to surpass them all by the time I'm done hehehe.
Unfortunately the need to manage my health is getting more important than ever sigh.
There's always so much work to do and so little time...

Thanks, brush pens are expensive so a calligraphy brush and inkwell bought in China is used.
Definitely very difficult to control.

Alright, I'll increase the frequency of longer studies.
Once I settle into a schedule I might be able to draw much more too.
I feel bad to not be drawing much right now.
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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Sat Sep 03, 2016 2:53 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Sat Sep 10, 2016 6:52 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Mon Sep 12, 2016 6:45 pm

Slim chance I'll be sleeping today with my workload piled up again.
My lifelong pattern of procrastination must be squashed by the end of the week.
Grrr, I will make my performance in everything even higher.
This challenge, bring it on.
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Re: 58;''

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Wed Sep 14, 2016 4:15 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Thu Sep 15, 2016 10:51 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Fri Sep 16, 2016 7:18 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby Aragah » Fri Sep 16, 2016 11:38 pm

10/10 great sketchbook.

If i knew how to animate i would give you feedback, but alas, I don't.
Super exciting to see all the studies and the effort and the payoffs.
I always love how animators analyze and dissect structure and anatomy.
Keep at it! ill be watching :3
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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Sat Sep 17, 2016 6:28 pm

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@Aragah
Thanks, I hope to improve much more to animate.
I still have a long way to go.
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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Sun Sep 18, 2016 5:20 pm

Plot twist, drawing has become procrastination.
Less drawing daily, no time for rest.
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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Tue Sep 20, 2016 7:44 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Thu Sep 22, 2016 11:55 pm

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Re: 58;''

Postby fiftyeightsqq » Sat Sep 24, 2016 3:29 pm

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