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Snowmoeka - Sketchbook

Postby SnowMoeka » Sun Jul 03, 2016 4:21 am

Hi! i'm new here, hope to post often and learn! :)
feel free to feedback and critique~
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Re: moeka gits gud

Postby SnowMoeka » Sun Jul 03, 2016 4:34 am

Here are some of my recent skecthes and studies, where I was mainly focusing on values, lighting and forms. I think I need a lot of practice in managing halftones, getting correct values relationship, the overall feeling of form. Some time ago I didn't realy understand an importance of reflected light on form, now I feel it's one of the most important aspects of realness of an image, idk if I'm rignt or not.
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Re: Snowmoeka - Sketchbook

Postby SnowMoeka » Sun Jul 03, 2016 11:45 am

some wips
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Re: Snowmoeka - Sketchbook

Postby poyou » Sun Jul 03, 2016 12:46 pm

Hi cool stuff! I think it might be cool for you to see about edges too, loomis talk about it in his books, but mostly it's a matter of observing where there is sharp angles and smooth parts. But i see you are going through Bargues! Hope to see more soon!

Just keep going on !
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Re: Snowmoeka - Sketchbook

Postby crankshaft » Sat Jul 09, 2016 8:06 am

Nice work. Some of these feel too quick and rushed. I would slow down and smooth out your graduations so that you can truly understand form and edges. The amount of brush strokes makes it easier for the eye to forgive mistakes hence you wouldn't learn smaller nuances and subtitles as much. Ie the form of a gentle curve would turn slower than the form of a tighter curve.
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Re: Snowmoeka - Sketchbook

Postby SnowMoeka » Sun Jul 10, 2016 2:10 pm

crankshaft, thanks! I will try to invest some time into more finished works! Going to do some concepts and illustrations~
poyou, thank you! I know about edges, but now i see that I don't use them how it should be done. I'll fix it in my future works.
some sketches and wip for now (some edges work is needed, i'll fix that later)
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Re: Snowmoeka - Sketchbook

Postby SnowMoeka » Wed Jul 13, 2016 1:07 pm

Can't draw the face I would like. :<
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Re: Snowmoeka - Sketchbook

Postby SnowMoeka » Sun Jul 17, 2016 2:30 pm

done with tone, will add color now
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Re: Snowmoeka - Sketchbook

Postby Ivica » Tue Jul 19, 2016 11:28 am

Hey man you might pull out more from this last one, looks really good. Keep at it.
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Re: Snowmoeka - Sketchbook

Postby SnowMoeka » Fri Apr 21, 2017 3:34 am

I haven't been here too long. I guess it's time for comebeck.
My goal is to improve drawing and forms.
I created a thread with finished works btw, check it out: viewtopic.php?f=4&t=3567
Here are some sketches:
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Re: Snowmoeka - Sketchbook

Postby Styxcolor » Mon Apr 24, 2017 12:10 pm

Great sketchbook! I especially like the tonal studies. You caught the halftones sooooo good. Everything is so soft and still defined.
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