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Postby blissfullyRandom » Mon Jan 16, 2017 7:19 pm

Attaching a few of my more recent works so I can look back on them probably. Feedback is appreciated, too!
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Undyne from Toby Fox's Undertale

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John from David Wong's John Dies at the End
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Re: blissfullyRandom's sketchbook

Postby blissfullyRandom » Tue Jan 24, 2017 12:54 pm

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Re: blissfullyRandom's sketchbook

Postby Imbalantus » Tue Jan 24, 2017 5:49 pm

Last painting looks pretty solid, great drama and proportions. Deserves a more detailed background I think.
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Re: blissfullyRandom's sketchbook

Postby rondellgayle » Tue Jan 24, 2017 7:41 pm

Interesting color choices on your pieces! On the last one, I'd say be careful of the foreshortening on the arm closest to the viewer. It's in a slightly weird place, being closest to the viewer (second to the knee) but also the pose pushing it a little further back than you want the other arm to be. Could be fun to do some arm studies of that and revisit it!

Happy drawing!
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Re: blissfullyRandom's sketchbook

Postby Le Grebe » Wed Jan 25, 2017 8:13 am

Hey! cool stuff!

hm, maybe the first one could do with a bit more light shadow within the character, instead of focusing on the edges. It would add some depth. Think of what you draw in 3D and volumes => what surface would "recieve" light or cast shadows? For instance: the nose, the muscles, etc.
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Re: blissfullyRandom's sketchbook

Postby blissfullyRandom » Sun Apr 09, 2017 8:21 am

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Had some fun with colour palettes!
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