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Re: Luna learns to draw (2015) (>^ω^<)

Postby Luna » Wed May 25, 2016 8:12 am

Take a note:
1.
一點風殘卷烈焰,念起青塵嘯雲天
相盼種種舊惆悵,思無法度還無邊
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—— 李少清(Luna) 二〇一六五月十六

2. Finally built up the gymnastics music bones today!!! >v< it's been twice that I only get the time for compose this piece once I need to leave just like that "magic paper" said... kidding, I don't believe it... ; v; ......

Looking forward this weekend. I am going to have a travelling with my mischief maker, we haven't seen each other since a year and a month ago.
The ancient poem said that when they said goodbye they still have the same moon in the sky every night when they missing each other, but what we have? Only the earth... cos when I am talking with the moon, you are enjoying the sunshine...
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Re: Luna learns to draw (2015) (>^ω^<)

Postby Luna » Wed Jun 29, 2016 4:34 pm

I wanted was just a job... ^^
remember what's the goal from now on, it was a big lesson.
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Re: Luna learns to draw (2015) (>^ω^<)

Postby KirqueDuSoleil » Thu Jun 30, 2016 3:50 am

Beautiful stuff - especially the watercolours. they remind me of studio Ghibli. you should watch 'the kingdom of dreams and madness' it is very satisfying.
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Re: Luna learns to draw (2015) (>^ω^<)

Postby Luna » Mon Jul 11, 2016 10:03 pm

KirqueDuSoleil Thank you so much for encourage me, Kirque! @v@ I will will remember the name of 'the kingdom of dreams and madness' and watch it when I have a chance! It's very nice of you given me this tip and encouragement, I will reply your sb soon when I back and read more pages of ur works! @v@ ^_^

So inspiring to practice artwork, but haven't be able to sit in drawing desk for a little while, I should do practice and edit this one soon the weekend. ^^
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Re: Luna learns to draw (>^ω^<)

Postby Luna » Fri Aug 19, 2016 2:12 pm

I have completely changed my ... so far, I don't know if I have ever truly give it up or not, but love hurts too much in any direction...
but “revenge” even worth...
Once someone has to cruelly give up her own dream in her life, the best way for her to keep being alive is helping someone else to achieve their dreams in their lives......
"""she is not 'worthy' of being a man to chase her own dream...... what a lovely lovely world...""" i can not forget..... whatever suits......
but "no mistakes in the tango, not like life. That's what makes the tango so great. If you make a mistake, get all tangled up, just tango on."
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Re: Luna learns to draw (>^ω^<)

Postby Luna » Sun Sep 11, 2016 9:58 pm

(^ω^) Dad told me "Life needs no complaints, but no stop."
I shall find time to draw instead of sad with no time while I am having a job. ^_^
Good fun to find good reasons and let my boss know and practise my drawings.
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Re: Luna learns to draw (>^ω^<)

Postby Peninsula » Wed Sep 14, 2016 12:45 pm

woah fashion-raccoon up in here
I can dig it!
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Re: Luna learns to draw (>^ω^<)

Postby DoopyDell » Wed Sep 14, 2016 6:35 pm

It's super awesome to see you posting! Also very cool to see things written in another language. I am trying to learn Spanish in my free time and it is good, but I wish I could be fluent and speak to everyone.

Also, no more sad time! You're drawing very well, so things are good!
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Re: Luna learns to draw (>^ω^<)

Postby Luna » Sat Dec 03, 2016 10:20 pm

dear Peninsula Thanks so much for encouraging me! <3 I am sorry for the turtle late reply and update. (=^ ^=)meow~ I have regretted that I didn't work hard enough for the challenge years ago, I could done hard work! (≧∀≦)ゞ I should find a way back to what I love to do in my life sometimes in the future.
lovely DoopyDell Thank you for talking with me, Doopy!!! (゜▽^*)) If one day I have a chance I might going to take a look how Spanish works! @v@ meow~! Thanks again for your words! <3
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Just wanna to take a quick note for over ignoring 1000,000 words I don't have a time and a life to switch to English right now~ I...emm... I really should have listened the queen said that "the work" is always very intensive so the challenge was just the preparation for it! but I didn't... having such a time right now I deserved it. really, cause I wasn't ready for the thing I truly loved. emm.... but hope the sky can give me another chance in the future~ (≧∀≦)ゞ

anyway, just take a quick note:
Nice tune from far away west inspired me a lot last night because the story of a person I've heard from the baboon. It was very touching that I have learned there is someone similar as me in another part of the earth also had a really hard time. But the most important part encouraged me is his kind and humble personality.
Although we all having or had a tough time, but I know that one is a kind human with a wonderful soul. It reminds me the forgotten wish that I had long ago...
Probably most of the human beings always trying to make the one happy... But somebody has to pass the saddest moment before s/he learns the essence of a nice world... the silent protest is useless but the conquest for the anger and the inhuman exploitation.

I probably won't have life and time to draw for another long period because I can't imagine until I saw...
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Re: Luna learns to draw (>^ω^<) ...

Postby Peninsula » Wed Dec 21, 2016 9:17 am

don't worry about it ;)
and thanks for reminding me - 好好学习天天向上
Your students aren't the only ones that use your notes haha!
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Re: Luna learns to draw (>^ω^<) ...

Postby KirqueDuSoleil » Fri Jan 13, 2017 2:06 am

Hey Luna - i always love to read what you write - i am simultaneously confused and inspired by your words.

on that note, unless you are referring to the word "mine" as opposed to someone "else's" you would usually say "the departure of my (.... insert plane, train, etc)" rather than the word "mine". "mine" is a word that means possession of an object without referring to what it is that you posses (have you seen "Finding Nemo"? - the seagulls say 'mine' without saying what they mean that is 'theirs') - but when you say 'my' you have to say what you are referring to i.e. 'my plane', 'my place", "my art", "my self", and that is more commonly said, because it is more clear. but if you were to say "(and) that is the departure of mine'" in response to someone saying 'that is the departure of my plane' that would be okay. you're doing great with your vocabulary i am sorry that english is so confusing i get it wrong myself a lot.

so usually when english speakers say 'mine' - they are saying something like 'that's mine.' and it usually has semi-strong ownership attributed to it - 'this land is MINE' but you could also say 'this is my land' - which English speakers like to say a lot (this is a reference to colonialism - which is very relevant in my country - Australia)

Your figures are looking really nice and full - like real people - but i think maybe the influence of anime might be flattening some of your faces- i want you to think more of the face as part of the head which is three dimensional - i found a good hint lately where you draw diagonal lines (relevant to the main directional line of the face) from the edges of the eyes downward to make the chin. These directional lines (which i highlighted in red) are good for working out the front plane of the face (between the lines) and the side planes (outside the two lines), but they are not perfect. Another good thing about this system is that you can draw the 'line between the lips' from these two lines and then draw your mouth around that. Also something that i have trouble with - make sure that the line you draw between the start of the eyes is parallel to the lines which dictate (hard english word, sorry) the slope of the nose and mouth - this will result in a more harmonious drawing of the face.

you're doing fantastic, your recent illustrations are so lovely and warm and they make me happy - please when you have time keep doing them so that i can see them.
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Re: Luna learns to draw (>^ω^<) ...

Postby Luna » Mon Apr 03, 2017 11:08 pm

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(∩_∩) 谢谢你,Peninsula!I m very sorry to take so long to reply your words ヽ(o_ _)o meow``~ ...I was... I was...in a very special time, but it's better now! ^_^ HOHO~
but Thank you for your encouragement!!! @v@b


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Thanks so much for giving me your precious words! I just want to say this ^v^:
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...also I am sorry for replying you so late.... emm..... because when I was reading those lovely lovely words in my favorite forum few months ago, I was been bullied by people, my heart was pretty broken in that moment...... so I didn't want to bring too much sadness (if I spoke it would probably with a lot of sad words if I was in pain) to this beeeautiful place so I chose didn't say anythings, but I was really touched, then after couple of months I finally been alive again! o(∩_∩)o hehe~
Thank you very much for the English correcting, Kirque!!! o(∩_∩)o that's mine! --> hmm~~~ It's one of a favorite part you made of mine! HOHO~
@v@b Cheers for your image!!! I will certainly to start to do it!!! I think it's a really good way for me to start to get better with human heads drawing!! <3 @v@// Meow~

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I am collecting the pieces of the heart now to do things for love, I only Do things for LOVE so far. and I have been proved this: Love suffers in this human world! ...... But I think I have to keep going and keep doing coz I really love *****... ^v^
Here are some pieces I have done o(∩_∩)o I am a happy raccoon cause I hope that I can see a real raccoon animal sometimes soon!
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Re: Luna learns to draw (>^ω^<) ...

Postby Luna » Mon Apr 03, 2017 11:22 pm

silly raccoon was in pain, but once it sees the drawing forum, it's a Haappppy raccoon! @v@b HOHO~
all happy, no pain anymore! Hope the world can be a happy place forever soon! >v< meow~it's just a hope that everyone are Haaaaapppy, and no bully!!!
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