failtome of dwagon °︸°

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Re: failtome of dwagon °︸°

Postby Venomisia » Wed Nov 02, 2016 1:25 pm

Haven't posted in a while..
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Some very very tiny ones... around thumb size..
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Not so tiny
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ugh max 10 pics.... okay new post
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Re: failtome of dwagon °︸°

Postby Venomisia » Wed Nov 02, 2016 1:29 pm

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Got two paintings I started with:
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I am a little bit stuck on the second one... but I really want to paint it.. I'll see it will probably happen eventually

I have so many bullshit paintings I sketched for but no idea what to do with...
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Re: failtome of dwagon °︸°

Postby Venomisia » Fri Nov 04, 2016 9:52 am

Realised I didn't post these..
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Re: failtome of dwagon °︸°

Postby devilfish_one » Sat Nov 05, 2016 5:02 am

Hey, coooooooool portrait, first one looks little bit noisy, but I really like the second one, especially in terms of simplicity and balancing between textures and zones of flat colors.
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Re: failtome of dwagon °︸°

Postby Venomisia » Sat Nov 12, 2016 1:42 am

Thank you! I actually like the noisy one more, but it's probably because I did it from life and caught likeness with that one and not with the second one = X..

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2 portraits from life
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Little sketchbook page
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Re: failtome of dwagon °︸°

Postby Venomisia » Tue Jan 10, 2017 1:53 am

Been a while!

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Re: failtome of dwagon °︸°

Postby Enydimon » Wed Jan 11, 2017 8:50 pm

Really great stuff since I was last here. I can feel the improvement.

I think you could probably experiment more with soft edges, though. A lot of your figures/objects are feeling a little too cut and pasted onto backgrounds.
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Re: failtome of dwagon °︸°

Postby Imbalantus » Thu Jan 12, 2017 6:38 pm

Yep, definitely lots of improvement. Illustrations and portraits are looking very solid.

Plague is my favourite one. The girl is too bright imo, I get the idea, but the problem is that she is so bright, that she looks pasted into the painting. I'm thinking that maybe if you get more of a value gradation into her figure, she will integrate better into the composition and the glowing effect will come out stronger. Another little problem is that moon, town and rower are all lined up. So maybe scatter the townlights a little more over the horizon, or move the moon more to the center.
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Re: failtome of dwagon °︸°

Postby Alexander Lidström » Thu Mar 23, 2017 4:40 am

Can't get into the hangout :o
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