[Honest Crit] Wartorn

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[Honest Crit] Wartorn

Postby BjornSoren » Thu Jun 25, 2015 8:52 am

Hello Permanoobs...
I'm new around here as you might tell!
I'm looking for some feedback on my portfolio piece, If anyone would take the time to help me out I'd appreciate it greatly -- I will revise.

Name: Wartorn
Concept: Medeival knight gone rogue. He's part of a band of three, he's the wise tank.
Setting: Low-fantasy, mystical world.
Desired critique: Design and technical execution.

Glad to finally be postin'
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Re: [Honest Crit] Wartorn

Postby Mr.Bubbles » Mon Jul 13, 2015 12:06 pm

First off I dig it. Alot.

His left arm feels a bit awkward like it's placed forward infront of him but it should be hanging down? Hope that made sense.
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