yeah, this is solid. I really appreciate the understanding you put into your stuff. My only observation is that I feel you have a sort of clunky design sense, which I'm not sure is intentional or not. I think if you were intentional you'd exploit the clunky shapes a little more and accent the cartoony side but I feel like you want to marry it with a more edgy and contrastier style... ? Just guessing away, let me know if any of this resonates. Either way super solid can't wait to see more!